Solomonsquill
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Solomonsquill2dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วgreat ability, train till exhaustion and then go to bed and wake up as if nothing. The same with any type of negative status unless it is something preposterous.
You have slept in you own bed; HP and MP have been restored 100% each. All ailments and negative status effects have been cured.- Solomonsquill3dตอบกลับถึง Solomonsquill
No problem just trying to help. Also, in the following chapters I noticed that you use where instead of we are.Where is not a verb, it is a word used while asking the location of something or someone. in spanish is the word "donde". Once again don't take it in a bad way, I enjoy your story and just want to help improve. I myself are still very lacking in English as it is not my first language. Thanks for your work so far.
- Solomonsquill4dแปะแล้ว
it's a interesting story so far (I'm in ch 20) and I hope that it keeps getting interesting. I have a couple of advices tho, you should put more tags and explain that it is a sayan in the rwby. I don't like the name Kron but that's just my opinion so don't stress over it and finally i don't know why but when you write an a (alone)it's always a capital letter. For example: I was looking at the scenery when A nevermore appeared. if you can try to correct that mistake for future chapters. Overall I enjoyed the story so keep you work, I just wanted to give you a piece of my mind don't take it in a bad way please. Also, I don't know what to think about the artwork....
- Solomonsquill1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วIs this despicable? It's not for me to judge, but I think so. Is it foolish? Adolescent maximalism isn't so foolish upon reflection. Do I pity Junpei? Honestly, no. I've always believed we are prisoners of our own desires. Therefore, seeing someone so withdrawn and apathetic towards others over something as trivial as bullying, I felt no sympathy. Cruel? Perhaps. But it's not every day you meet a teenager who, because of bullying, is ready to demean the value of life, considering himself a sage who has seen the ugly side of humanity.
- Solomonsquill1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วThe most beautiful and out-of-world sight I ever saw. Almost like a dream.
- Solomonsquill1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วA2 and I both lifted up the large stone door blocking the entrance to the building and as we came out of the door I saw it as we officially entered the Lands Between. "Thats... A massive tree Jake." A2 stated bluntly as she stared spellbound just as I was at the massive glowing golden tree that pierced the clouds in the distance that made me sigh at the grand sight.
- Solomonsquill1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วI tinker with the armor until evening. I couldn't finish everything at once, so I decide to leave the work for tomorrow. It's better to take things slowly than to rush and later regret making mistakes due to haste. After finishing today's tasks, I stretch contentedly and head outside, letting the dry, cool wind of the wasteland brush against my face. Folding my arms behind my head, I begin to whistle a tune unfamiliar to this world. The good old Linkin Park always leaves me with positive emotions, and even after so much time, they remain one of the best rock bands.
- Solomonsquill1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Ah... Did I fall asleep?" The brunette looked around the room with sleepy eyes and, stretching her stiff limbs, turned her gaze to the robot, which stood motionless in its place. Sighing heavily, Susan tried to stand up, but her legs felt like jelly. She began to fall face forward, unable to hold herself up on her trembling, weak limbs.
- Solomonsquill4mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I would say a dog more than a cat.
She resembled a playful cat, always brimming with energy. Sitting quietly and patiently wasn't her strong suit. - Solomonsquill4mthแปะแล้ว
A really interesting and funny take on the fate grand order series, I enjoy the banter the Mc generates and the reactions of the other characters to his shenanigans. I hope this fic will have a more mature tone when needed but overall I enjoyed reading this work so far. Keep up the good work author or I will punch you!
- Solomonsquill4mthตอบกลับถึง Azrail93
Thanks!
I left a small portal open to the cabin and used it to project the TV screen onto the sky so that everyone interested could follow the tournament battles. It took another two hours for all battles of the second round to end, and I had to admit that I saw some interesting Pokemon among those that made it to the next round, chief among them were a (high) silver stage Lucario and a pink (high) silver stage Snorlax of all things. - Solomonsquill4mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
pink?? English is not my first language so anyone can tell me if this is an expression or something among the likes?? thanks beforehand by the way.
I left a small portal open to the cabin and used it to project the TV screen onto the sky so that everyone interested could follow the tournament battles. It took another two hours for all battles of the second round to end, and I had to admit that I saw some interesting Pokemon among those that made it to the next round, chief among them were a (high) silver stage Lucario and a pink (high) silver stage Snorlax of all things. - Solomonsquill4mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วHe took a deep breath and picked up his cane and began to move towards his room. He could still hear some grunts from the inside yet he knocked at the door and walked in not waiting for the reply to come.
- Solomonsquill4mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
And I don't understand why does he love so much Raenyra??? He was exhiled all her childhood, she didn't even remembered him due to that. I find this stupid and only for the plot, really disapointing
"You ask too much of me, Aemma, but I will see what I can do." - Solomonsquill4mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Red left the chat...
"Ex-fiance actually," Delia just laughed, "He's actually my Ashy's dad, but we had a difference of opinion on how we wanted to raise him when he was born, so we ended up splitting up just after he was born." - Solomonsquill4mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
ash's daddy???
Though he did pause to stare Delia in the eyes after we concluded our business. So weird. - Solomonsquill5mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 137 Chapter 137
- Solomonsquill5mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
this illya???
"Ilya, stop! I'm too tired," mock-panted Harry, leaning on his knees and letting out exaggerated breaths of air.