thought they was twin😫

Jesus this is the second time I think I'll write a review about book but I wish I own the Web novel I'd have them ban this shit doesn't deserve even a star

must author make the mcs all be berated before they becomes their stupid so call invincible I thought reading a novel without CN author will be great but y'all fucking disappointing smh

powerful? sorry to say but this ain't no power based novel at least not yet 🤷

anyway what wound?

firstly it start off grate but as per each chapter it keeps going downrail and funniest part is that it's still in the early Phase if its so bad at this stage then what do you expect in the later phase 😂

I'm sorry y'all there's been another guy interested in the story and his work has a better translation than this. figured it has more viewer than here so I decided to drop it for him

that was author fault check the trial for better translate

I saw it today also I was surprised and was happy while at it I only hope he has a better translate so the people could enjoy and have better understanding of the characters and plot planned to drop it on here and better face my work. Thanks broski

but will he ever be strong as the title suggest almost fifty chp and we don't even see what he can do?

Zeus storyline

I finally ended this wow

I've never read a book as bad as this my whole life like the plot is so bad the characters the MC the world building the Grammer and if I could not even give this a star it would be great an immature pen work

God of tears

the novel plot and character are great but I feel like author made su wan kinda stupid a little I hope it change later on

we want more

I read it already and I have to say that's a great start the characters and all. so I recommend this to anyone who's hoping to read something new and fresh trust you won't regret it

Thanks for the review will make some changes to that and specify Bai Yun's gender 🙏

been working on other novel while hoping to drop many chapter on this to take a little break to focus on my next work

Read a few chapter and its going well and not Everytime you get novel on magic on a scale of 10 I'd give it a 8/10 since I'm just starting and all is one definitely recommending this on my social apps