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This was said 11 months ago😏

Bro it's best you change the name if you want better recognition. you get what I mean

Author here😁 I'm going to shamelessly give myself five stars I know there are some shortcomings, but overtime it will improve. Continue reading and please support 🤪

@sad_storyteller

The tags are not a joke you know. It literally says fantasy and cultivation there.🙄 Try reading the synopsis 😤

Okay if I'm being honest, the story line is engaging and it gets interesting at the fifth chapter. Author, you need to work on your grammatical flow. I can see improvement, just try not to repeat the same mistakes.

The storytelling is okay and the portrayal is nice. it's a story with great potential. keep updating.

Apart from the fact that the chapters are a little short, I think the story is actually good. Try getting a book cover. it'll help. nice work though 😁

The story hooked me from the start that I didn't even realize I had read to the next chapter. I really commend the author for writing such an immersive story. The thoughts the actions are so well aligned, that you will fall in the story and feel like you are experiencing it personally. Good writing. Please continue