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bjbrown

bjbrown

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New writer😁😁

2022-09-14 เข้าร่วมแล้วJapan
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25.3h

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5
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  • bjbrown
    bjbrown8 days ago
    ตอบกลับถึง Mapveq

    No I never planned on making this harem i hate those btw

  • bjbrown
    bjbrown12 days ago
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    After consuming the tentacles Nephilim

  • bjbrown
    bjbrown16 days ago
    แปะแล้ว

    Shameless author review I want to use this as a means to communicate with everyone, my lovely readers to tell you what you may have known, what you don't know and what to expect. So from the prologue consisting of four chapters the story dates forward in the future with advanced technologies which ended up turning into ruins The story is an apocalyptic story filled with action packed scenes, character development, romance, societal trauma and some adult stuff The MC Tokita Ryuma is a NEET who at the point of death realized that the life he lived was terrible and he wished if given a second chance he will correct everything and be a changed person He will be very strong, but i wont' guarantee him being overpowered The story will be fast paced with daily uploads You should read it, add it to your collection and give me some stones, that's all and Thank you

  • bjbrown
    bjbrown4 months ago
    ตอบกลับถึง QuaziY

    thank you for your honest review but I'll also like to correct some misunderstandings. firstly, I'm a proud citizen of my country Japan and I'm not actually good with English but i still try my best using grammaly and some other apps to correct my grammars. About the names, i tried avoiding the use of native names and decide to go with two, three and four syllabus names because the native names are quite hard to pronounce and memorize. And about the supernatural content, i think having a system is already supernatural enough but nevertheless I've taken note of your complaint and I'll try to fix those in coming chapters

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  • bjbrown
    bjbrown5 months ago
    แปะแล้ว

    Author speaking. if you've gone through the novel you will realise that is isn't a regular cheat system novel. and that's why I actually gave the system a name as "Human support system" in other words it meant to be a guide to greatest, the system is there to make a clear part for the host to follow and not to grant the host with everything he wishes, that's why as Aoki (MC) progresses in his football journey so those the challenges get tough and Aoki gets stronger and better. And also the construction of the novels also makes it that the story isn't based on Aoki alone but also diving into the story of other characters that accompany him in his journey and also those he comes across I guarantee that the story will be fun, filled with lots of twist, shocking moments and many more, all you have to do is add to your collection, give me your stones and finally some reviews to help me develop

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  • bjbrown
    bjbrown5 months ago
    ตอบกลับถึง Tadeas_Manzel

    thanks for noticing the mistake I'll be careful next time

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  • bjbrown
    bjbrown5 months ago
    ตอบกลับถึง Tadeas_Manzel

    ??

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  • bjbrown
    bjbrown10 months ago
    ตอบกลับถึง Mapveq

    Then I'll go with your request then. the only problem is that it will be hard on me to give a perfect or detailed description of a fight scene without the visualisation though, but I'll still try my best

  • bjbrown
    bjbrown10 months ago
    ตอบกลับถึง Huzaifa_Johar

    Yes just an average person with the basic knowledge of football.You can support me with some stones😊

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  • bjbrown
    bjbrown10 months ago
    ตอบกลับถึง Huzaifa_Johar

    sorry for the typo, I'll make sure not to make those mistakes again.You can also send me some stones🤗

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