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it happens all the time with PhD scholars in real life too. the mentor always gets credit for just being the mentor. just look for the earlier controversy regarding the discovery penicillin.

that is because i am editing my earlier mistakes. I'm currently editing on ch 5. after a few more chapters the writing gets again better as I got more experience.

sasuke ? the quality of your chapters is dropping. i know writing is hard, I also make too many mistakes . you need to proof read more or have your fan/friend do it for you. i hope you take the suggestion as positive encouragement. PS. your story is good. i hope you don't turn it into a harem story.

yes beginning chapters are like this. i plan to edit them in the weekend . but the story is not ai generated. You can compare yourself with any latest chapter. this is my first attempt at writing and I made many mistakes in the beginning some i have a hard time correcting. you can continue with the story and see the progress .

Thanx. your words motivate me to write more and write better. but unfortunately I am only a human and have limits. too many limits. if you liked the story so far please leave a review. it would help me a lot. thanx.

there is some connection. but that's not it.

solid advice. in the beginning I was in a dilemma on this point but ultimately decided to go with first name first. I could change it but wouldn't it be weird now after so many chaps ?

you are going to like the changes. believe it

okay. i will do it