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Thank you so much for your honest review! I really appreciate your insights, especially about pacing and character development. I will definitely work on slowing down key moments and making the characters feel more natural. Your feedback helps me improve, and I’m glad you find the story engaging! Hope you continue enjoying the journey.

I appreciate your feedback! To avoid confusion, I’ve adjusted the tags to better reflect the story’s tone. The MC is more of an anti-hero than a classic villain, so I’ve removed the 'Villain' tag. Thanks for pointing this out, it’s important to set the right expectations for readers.

Thanks for your question. This is more of an anti-hero novel than a traditional villain story. The MC is reincarnated as a villain but isn’t purely evil, he’s focused on survival, power, and rewriting his fate rather than seeking redemption. If you’re looking for a story about an unapologetically evil protagonist, this might not be what you’re expecting.

Not sure yet, but I know I want to create stories that people love. What about you?

Nope, haven't read Questism yet. is it good?

Whoa, my bad, Tenzing I was reading your awesome comments while writing and accidentally slipped your name into my notes, not the story itself. Total mix-up on my part, haha. It’s all Damien in there, promise! Hope you’re still enjoying it.

Yeah, I get that! It’s way more satisfying when enemies who think they’ve won end up suffering before their downfall. A slow, well-deserved revenge arc always hits harder than just an instant defeat.

Love this, I hear you, no damsel-in-distress vibes here. Damien’s got to claw his way out of trouble with his own wits and skills. Chapter 3’s fight was just a taste. More solo badassery coming your way

Hey Tenzing, glad you’re digging the start. Damien’s definitely got some wild ambitions brewing. No morals? Well, he’s not exactly a saint, but he’s figuring out where he stands in this messed-up world. Power and eternal life are on the table, stick around to see how far he’ll go to grab them.

Oh, you’re reading my mind. Training’s definitely in the cards, Damien’s not gonna sit around waiting for the system to spoon-feed him. Battlefield chaos and army-crushing power? That’s the dream, and I’m building him up to it. Patience, my friend, he’s got to survive the nobles first.