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Honestly I think this too, but you know Zane is like the chillest guy there is with all the power and charisma add to that he is traveling universes and meeting new people all the time? If this was just Young Justice I would have settled for like 1-2. But I'm trying to do my best not making it weird and forced✌🏻

Piece of advice, go see Witchy woe a fanfic abou TVD with the same essence. The MC there really showed the how op Archmage can. You are doing good, if a bit slow but the way Harry is utilizing the essence seems like a huuge nerf or a bit dumb. Thank you✌🏻

Yeah but I don't think either know the equation do they?

Already took care of that, although not extensively Zane already showed her how to control her power and behave. Honestly I also want her to join him but she's too young and Zane doesn't really want to play babysitting. And if you watched infinite earth movie Kara was alway a good person, if she knew Zane true capabilities she would get mad at him for not helping others and stuff, so I believe that's for the best now. Maybe in the future he can get Galatea or Power girl instead? I'm open for ideas and suggestions.

Now that I think about it, shit Supergirl is really miserable isn't she? Meh what can we do it's too late for now🤷🏻

Hopefully😅

Vol.1 or the end of season 1. There's more and I hope I can write a lot✌🏻

like this

Nah man you do you. It's just cliché you know? Saw too much of it It's not even funny. Just do what you think is right, or not it's your story after all and I liked it. It's just you know, a 100+ yo, magic king, expert warrior and fought wars to just end as a joke for some kids and arrogant immortals will be disappointing that's all.

Cool story hope you keep the good work. Please don't ruin it by making him go to school and be besties with Issei and the main cast or something, he's already over 100yo so please make him act his age. It's okay to be silly with his wives but not with everyone else.