Aria_Monrow

Ok! I agree with you but it isn't garbage. Sometimes it is necessary to add details to make the readers feel like they are inside the world they are reading. The author will get better with time.

Why aren't you uploading anything! I am dying waiting for more

Thanks for the support! I'll be uploading like one chap per week or two if I finish more in time. Stay tuned to know more and do comment on the chapters since I live for reading comments.

One horned poisonous rabbit

Sup Charls~ Just gonna drop a review on this heavenly fragment of perfection. The World building is perfect and as slow as each chapter seems to be, I enjoy it a lot. Gonna wait for more...

I literally ended up deleting it again! God I can't seem to like my beginning but I have rewritten it and will start uploading it from Monday and hopefully there will be no more rewrites. Thanks for the support..Teehe~

Overall it is good but you should remove R-18 content from synopsis or your novel might get banned since it was stated in the rules. The story is great although a bit hard to understand at some parts. The way you depicted your characters is beautiful and surely it will get better in the near future.

The Title of the book coupled with the naming sensed and the way the author has described the events and scenes is quite sophisticated...to the point that I might as well call it poetic but it is something that adds much charm to the novel as a whole. It's quite an amazing novel and surely there isn't any much better than this one. If you do not read this then you will miss out on a polished gem.

Let me be blunt. It's not the grammar mistakes but the way you piece the sentences which makes some unable to enjoy the novel. You should write it like this...take this as an example. I just rewrote it right now so it is going basic but get an example from this. It was an incredible change brought by fate as person A and B got married. Not even three months had passed by that the news of (said person) becoming pregnant was heard. Alex was delighted to know of this news, his grandfather was also content with the fantastic news but (for whatever reason it could be) Dr. Jamie was horrified. Like this..change it into something that is readable, even if it is basic. It will be gun for others

Please improve your grammar. The novel itself is amazing but the grammar will make many readers drop it immediately. Do not worry and practice so it will be helpful and improve your writing.