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First of all in this context we are taking about the Naruto world. You know child killers and a whole different culture. This ain’t earth, no one got the same morals are you lol. How is that a valid reason to give a fic a 2 star review when the context of where you are basing this off is ours in a different world. You are brain ded sir.
Bro wt
It does Did I say it didn’t? Idk can’t see the paragraph
I never said he would get a second. Just that I d ever thought 2 girls were harem
Im not chasin u off but sur
Its the Pokemon world so it’s different with my spin. A person that lived “10” years in the pokemon world would have lived till 30 in ours. That might sound weird but that won’t change much. I don’t care much if you criticise my ff. Like sure its not perfect and in a few chapters could use a redo. But ur calling my fic droppable because of a person technically living for 30 years in our world if they spent 10 years in the Pokemon one. If your willing to drop a fic because of the weird time difference then idk if fanfics or most novels on this site is readable for u
U cant expect something perfect from me I have changed some stuff to make more sense for the readers but the thing your complaining about right now is 72 months apparently Maybe because of the number of months? Idk but if your gonna complain about a detail like that it’s just like why bother?
Then leave? Y comment
You would assume if you read the sentence that there is another part of the list he read
When checking comments I can’t really see the whole sentence so I get confused sometimes when replyin.
If the rip off brock can do it then brock’s onix can do it as well. Dont question this
Id say I’m pretty knowledge about Pokemon but I would not be able to remember every pokemons name type and their weaknesses. This is assuming that this ability will identify Pokemon from the new region aswell.