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tf is happening , why was her father sick if the mother was cursed , should have explained it better author

then whyd he did in the original?

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very underwhelming name

it's all so complicated , i understand making your novel unique and diff from the others but like the same system troupe would be so much better to understand , a small turn off!

dude istg this is the best novel I have read , I can't imagine how good it will be in the coming years , it's sad that it won't gain much traction because of the " novels extra and acadamy genre " and wont reach every one except who are brain rotted for these extra / acdamy mid novels section because I personally believed it deserves far more recognition ,like an anime or a movie ,that the kind of masterpiece this is.

henh ,that doesn't make sense tho

ik this will not sit right with majority of the audience but the base of this was set from the start ,all the mc wanted was to become strong and for that it was necessary , he never wanted to revolutionalize the noble society and this family fued ! so i kinda get this plot , it was a good arc🙌

beautifully written !!