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Gheata_Darian

Gheata_Darian

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2022-08-14 เข้าร่วมแล้วRomania
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0.5h

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  • Gheata_Darian
    Gheata_Darian1yr
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    Honestly, I don't understand the 4 stars reviews. This is pure masterpiece. I actually liked everything. Story telling, characters, the plot, no mistakes. It's a lovely book probably written by an amazing person. Please keep writing! I haven't read many books on the website as I am too focused on my novel, but this is the best one so far.

    I'm gone... deleted
    แฟนตาซี · _Shades_
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    Gheata_Darian1yr
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    Lovely story telling. The story has yet to progress as there are only 2 chapters, but it seems great so far. Some punctuation mistakes, but apart from that, I see no downsides at all. [img=recommend]

    conceptds
    ย้อนยุค · f0011
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  • Gheata_Darian
    Gheata_Darian1yr
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    Mysterious and captivating. Got my interest from the very first paragraph. amazing work, my man. I only read once chapter, but I can't wait to read the next ones. I'll add it to my library for sure😊

    The Vengeance Hours
    แฟนตาซี · Kamelzy1
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    Gheata_Darian1yr
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    Hi guys! The shameless 5 star review from the author. I put everything I had into this web novel and I will continue with the same effort and passion. Please reply to this comment if you have any questions and I'll be happy to help.[img=recommend]

    GIRL!
    สยองขวัญ · Gheata_Darian
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  • Gheata_Darian
    Gheata_Darian1yr
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    Nice idea you got there which got me hooked instantly! A bit too many mistakes for my like and the story feels a bit rush. Please include more description, your story barely started. Leaving that to the side, the idea is great with HUGE POTENTIAL. Please update it asap and revise the chapter before posting it.

    MY SACRED HEART
    ย้อนยุค · Isabelle_Kenny
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    Gheata_Darian1yr
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    Good plot with interesting development. It gets better and better as you progress through chapters. Please revise your own work by double checking it once you finished a chapter, there are some grammar mistakes that I am not fond of. Continue with the amazing work and be a bit more patient as you go through it

    Let's make history!(old version)
    แฟนตาซี · daylightmoon123445
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  • Gheata_Darian
    Gheata_Darian1yr
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    more attention please

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    Let's make history!(old version)
    แฟนตาซี · daylightmoon123445
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  • Gheata_Darian
    Gheata_Darian1yr
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    The plot is interesting, quite a few spelling mistakes here and there, but a nice start

    Ch 1 Chapter 1:
    Let's make history!(old version)
    แฟนตาซี · daylightmoon123445
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    Gheata_Darian1yr
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    Damn, that was quite good. You got some talent for sure. I just feel to you could've maybe add a bit more world background and description. Apart from that, nice and idea and good storytelling. Well done!

    God of Sleep: The Whisper of Slaughter
    เกม · SophocleS
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