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Nice! The opening is attractive and the style is interesting. I liked the accuracy of the details. I think it only lacks a good cover.
nice flow and story line btw, but the title is not very assertive, the cover not bad, overall it's a good story I rat it with 7/10
The cover is nice and the synopsis is attractive, but I didn't like the title. The opening chapter of the first chapter was also nice, so keep going[img=recommend]
u r right[img=Relaxed]😂
Thank you, I will keep that in my mind[img=recommend]
Nice !!, I liked the accurate description of the characters, and I also didn't notice any grammatical errors. My only criticism is the idea of reincarnation which I personally find a bit cliched, but overall not bad.