Danta_Santa

so, i have just read your 4 available chapters and I have to say that story development is very good, it feels a little bit different from normal fantasy and cultivation novels, so keep it up and I will be continuing reading it. at least until it's not contracted. 😅😁

ohh that feels like a start of a not so repetitive storyline.

ok man, I can see that this is your first time writing, but I wasn't able to find any grammatical errors and the writing style was good too.

wha? gate? man gate is a magic realism, how u gonna make it cultivation as mentioned in tags

seems kinda generic.