Aqsa_Haram

This was your nice attempt. But not so good. Kindly work on it. This are very little use of words. Use some more the amount of the words. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

Good effort. I like the story concept, its quite interesting. But, I like you to put moe effort in sentence making. Overall, I like the story