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KRPL1dตอบกลับถึง Malcolm_MasseyI think this girl is the only good one.
"It wasn't me, Eiji-sama. I originally wanted to kill that man named Hikaru Kamiki in a more violent way in prison secretly."- KRPL8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
she already had* Or so i think.
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - KRPL8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I think ot will be beyter if you focus on the Mc’s name. Sometimes you bring it as “Yechen”, it’s better to be “Ye Chen”, more comfortable and smoother in the sentence.
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - KRPL8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
This chapter’s quality was way better than the previous ones.
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - KRPL8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Thx for the chapter. I think gender inconsistency (him/her) need some work,and add some plot progression.
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - KRPL8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Bit of both is good, and i think you could work some more on the smut chapters and story progression. Let it be more solid.
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - KRPL8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Thx for the chapter.
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - KRPL8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
The legendary inverted nip*les!!
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - KRPL8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
😂🤣😂🤣
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - KRPL8dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Thx for the chapter.
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - KRPL13dตอบกลับถึง Melon_daomaster_9
Count me in
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - KRPL13dตอบกลับถึง Ye_qingtian
Small details are for you to do, since it's your novel, but me i, personally, don't like yuri, yaoi or things alike. I prefer the heroines being devoted to the MC alone and don't have intimacy high level of skinship and so. I like when the MC's women just think and have eyes for him alone, and being intimate with just him. I won't say just virgins, NTR(netori to be spicefic) milfs, even incest. I don't mind any of those as long as the things above are there. "and sorry for bullshiting too much"
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - KRPL14dแปะแล้ว
Seems like an interesting book, but is there yuri?
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - KRPL17dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 113 I Can Help
- KRPL17dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Blowy
Realizing that her little help might not be very effective and might even backfire, she hesitated for a moment and then pulled back a bit, and then like a fish resurfacing for air, swiftly ducked under the covers. - KRPL17dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Confirm*
As for Otome, Sasaki also didn't want to comfirm his relationship with someone else until she approved. - KRPL17dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
An* impulsive
Afterall, she was indeed on impulsive girl. - KRPL17dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I would love such interactions with other girls too.
Looking at his face and seeing that he was really not angry, the girl, suddenly in good mood, chuckled and tightened her arms around his neck, burying her head back into his chest again. - KRPL17dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Doted on her* the most
Although she didn't really believe that, Brother Fuyumi, who usually doted on the the most would hit her, the shadow Okino Kazuki left on her that night was too deep an impression for her not to be scared.