Imjustadev

why does every mc gets forced to do annoying things like this, like this time they said he should be the class rep, the teacher approved I'm just confused why the mc *and other mc's) Don't just refuse you can't force him/them just because the teacher said so doesn't mean you have to roll over and do it

what does Allah has to do with cthon?

he just said in the previous chapter that he would have found out regardless if tried to hide his change or not

the writing quality and world building are excellent, but the ploy sometimes feels forced like the Author ran out of ideas on where to go from this point and said aha I know what to do let's expose the mc to batman and have him become his mentor and unlikely family, also at some point the mc became a pushover that whenever the ask something of him he goes let me think about it and says yes anyways, his excuse is always resources, like bro you have a f**king ultramatrix, buy books, use gray matter and read them, start ur own company, store or some shit, don't cling to batman, altho he did resist batman's influence a little, he could've moved somewheres else, or string armed him a little, anyways good luck to the Author with his story but it's not for me, take what u will from this, it's just constructive criticism.

finally an amazing Snape fic where the story's focus is on the hp world and is not mixed with other works, writing quality, world background, story development, and character design are all amazing.

what's the og name and author?

fck no

this is absolutely amazing the writing and grammar can Improve but overall it's really good, I just wish you don't make the mc a pushover