Nicholas_Robeson

after 15 chapter still in the same spot in the story

it is very good need some more editing but overall it is very good so far. one of the best sci-fi books I've read on here.

he is all over the place and it is truly ridiculous

actually a mixture of black and gray would be better to limit shadows it would be less noticeable to the human body at night

good so far keep up writing the chapters

author needs to stop repeating himself

military time 0 hour to 24 hour

same a previous chapter

Oblivion and Skyrim character creation has takes at least 2 hours for me to complete.

I just a normal guy and I know 3 car enthusiast at the age of 18 there are a ton of them every where just because you can't afford it doesn't mean you can't be interested in it