this book is just getting started but it has an interesting plot. still some grammar issues to work through but its a cool plot concept. keep going author!

it's a great start to the tale. currently, there are only 4 chapters but has potential for sure. Keep up the work, author! Hopefully you will continue to learn and grow through the whole process!

A werewolf. A vampire. With electrokinesis and Telekinesis. All in one person. What could possibly go wrong? should be interesting to see where the author takes this tale

The plot is an interesting concept. the writing itself could be cleaned up a bit. some of the sentences dont quite flow, but putting that aside its still an interesting plot about this young billionaire who starts off not remembering anything. it has potential for sure

Purgatory, a hell all its own. so far this is showing to be an interesting novel. its well written and keeps you interested. there are some 4th wall breaks but easy enough to over look. should be interesting to see where this one goes

still early for this tale but its interesting. murder mystory concept that shoudl be interesting to see where the author takes this tale. The main character is a manipulative bastard but you need that to win in a squid games type unknown world.

This is a decent tale but there is a ton of new terms and culture that are thrust upon you at the start with little explanation or word vomit overkill in telling what makes up the world. there isnt a natural progression of information and world building. could be a fun plot over all but one likely needs to be well versed in similar stories and mythology to grasp the concepts in this tale. this is likely not a tale for Someone not familiar with these concepts from previous readings. still an interesting concept, and could be interesting to see where the author takes us in this rebirth tale of revenge and deep bloodlines.

I am looking forward to seeing what author ChaosInvoker has in store for us with this one! Bit of an odd start but once you get into the main plot its quite interesting. only 21 chapters so far as of this review but promising.

Afraid of the dark? perhaps not a book for you. astral projection or dream walking to strange lands with stranger creatures and beings. will the boogeyman follow you back to the waking world? should be a fun read for those looking for a bit of Halloween fun.

will be interesting to see where this goes

This tale is well written, though a bit heavy on "Tell" vs show. still a good showing from this author, and I will be curious to see how this plot develops.

I try to be a fairly harsh critic, and most novels are total trash writing even if they have an interesting plot. this one thus far has been decent writing with a good amount of vivid description without being just oversaturated with unnecessary fluff. That is a huge plus in my book. Keep it up author!

If you are looking to drop right into the action of the world this tale will do that for you. decent battle right from that start to kick this off and start world building.

This is an interesting tale from this author. Should be fun to see where it goes. There are always small ways to improve any work, but over all this one is decent.

This is developing to be an interesting tale. I look forward to seeing where the rest of it goes. the first chapter is enough to get you interested and wanting to know more about the plot

interesting start. should be interesting to find out where this goes!