Craaaaaaaaaazed!!!! Forever biased, but I'm so excited to see your writing again!! I know you were working on that horror game awhile ago, so I'm excited to read more! But it is making me wonder what's going on with gathering of hearts. Shouldn't you be working on that???

Eek! I'm so excited for a new story!!!

seal*

I feel like that's not how dumby is spelled. dummy?

super twice? maybe pick a different word?

been what? upset?

Is*

ask or inquired or something

better off

double period

you're

AoE game is WEAK

if he is this rude the rest of the book, I demand you kill him off.

d y i n g

Just remember who was nice to you when you're a big shot and I need a new car. (*_*)

Lovely lovely lovely!! I may be bias since I know the author, but her quality of work is always top notch and this one is no different! keep up the work and I will read your new chapters with excitement every day!