oh babes, he's tall you should see my character notes I have on him

I absolutely adored the first chapter, from the first word to the last, it hooked me and pulled me in the more i read it. I hope to see where this story goes as I read on.

you guys are the best

every chapter is a cliffhanger🤪🤪😂

being an amazing author because you're amazing 😊😊

Ugh I know. It's he annoying.

Daily. They're daily!!

really had me there in the first half

$10 says the mom leaves milkshakes outside to get him over there

Really enjoyed your prologue - chapter transition. I didn't expect to be given a new point of view! Great job

I enjoyed the read, the detail was very good, and diction was good. I can't wait to see where this goes and what's to come of the Umbras or the house of aeron. 😊 good job

*these

*trance

yeah still constantly reading and rereading and fixing errors and the flow of I wrote things😊 thank you

The detail was really well written, I felt like I was watching an mmo anime. I like the different turns the story took; it made it more exciting and pulled me in to wanting to read it more.

I've never really been one for this genre, but I found myself being pulled in with each turn the story took. I definitely thought I had what this would be about nailed and then it would take a different turn. I absolutely enjoyed reading this and plan to read it through to the end. Thanks for recommending it to me😊