wow bro!!!! This is really interesting!!! I will continue keep going author🔥

its fire i like sayuri ability

The novel is good, the writing style is good, but it could be improved, but it is good, simple, without complication, the story is interesting to me, I enjoyed it and all its details The mysteries made me ask a lot of questions and in every chapter I come up with a question or two, and whenever I found answers I got new questions The tragedies and human feelings are all written so well that I felt as if they were written realistically

yes do it rewrite the first 5 chapter