Yogesh1550

But you still didn't correct.

Same line you said above in first paragraph. so much extra words in this small chapters. it's like complete water

You are writing very less words and now here is extra words for stupid narration. System explained above Don't make mc this much stupid.

It can be snake species in some novels.

I haven't read what's later on but i am sure there would be a female who is in need of help then mc will save her by fighting with his life on line then She will join mc harem that will be formed later on. come on author atleast bring out some new ideas

Author can't even stay at his points like in start he said transmigrated people like to collect girls and etc etc shit and now here he is fcking collecting them like they are some kind of wild Pokemon. "This Tang San is Different" yes he is fcking different like original Tang san never collected girls like this

It's like Jacob is protagonist of novel and Leo is some kind of arrogant young master and after young master humiliated Jacob vowed to get revenge

Who cares when chinese novels can make protagonist father name Carlos and Mother name Emily while his name is An Su. So why can't these original author use these weird combination names. Although it looks shitty.

Finally the thing I have been waiting for. Although I was too frustrated over Uprising but now it's good. Now I need some fights if possible Like Ben vs Ghost or Ghost vs Boss or That Demon Guy Vs Leo not boss Leo