Enjoyed the story so far. I sometimes lost track of what I was reading because of the length of sentences, but aside from that, the story was really good. I hope you upload more regularly.

I really like the writing style. It feels like something new, not as if you are living through the eyes of the character, but as if it's a story that the MC is telling the reader. Well done on the story and world-building and I hope the story keeps up the quality.