Raven_paw123
Lv2
I have a lot of incomplete stories.I mainly make each story because I don't know what to write for the others.
2022-06-24 เข้าร่วมแล้วGlobal
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การเขียน
4.6h
ของการอ่าน
36
อ่านหนังสือ
ป้าย
6โมเมนต์
21
Raven_paw1237mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วI saw the comic and ordered bleach
Bai Qingqing covered her flushed face with her hands. If she looked at it any longer, she was going to have stys on her eyes.- Raven_paw1237mthตอบกลับถึง Rosmery_Martinez
-shrug-
Also, was it really okay for that thing to be swinging around like that? Wasn't he afraid of hitting it? - Raven_paw1237mthตอบกลับถึง KTpi
only possible explanation 🤷
Was this guy on drugs? - Raven_paw1237mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
HE BREATHED
"That's good. I'm Parker, a male leopard!" Parker crouched in front of Bai Qingqing and inhaled deeply as he looked at her carefully. This action caused a huge thing between his legs to swing about wildly. - Raven_paw1237mthตอบกลับถึง Missy_C
-wheeeeeze- I cant!
"That's good. I'm Parker, a male leopard!" Parker crouched in front of Bai Qingqing and inhaled deeply as he looked at her carefully. This action caused a huge thing between his legs to swing about wildly. - Raven_paw1237mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วParker felt that the female was so beautiful that he forgot to breathe.
- Raven_paw1237mthตอบกลับถึง Inge_Smits
Lol
The best thing about Bai Qingqing was her fair and flawless skin. She didn't seem stunning at first glance, but the longer he stared at her, the more beautiful she seemed. Her large and slightly downturned eyes made her seem extremely innocent. - Raven_paw1237mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Am I okay? AM I OKAY? *BLEEP* DO I LOOK OKAY?
Parker immediately chased after her. He had let the female fall off the tree as he was shocked as well. Extremely anxious, he crouched in front of the female and asked her, "Female, are you okay?" - Raven_paw1237mthตอบกลับถึง Kyrie_Harrell
MOMMA!😱😱
"Ah!" It transformed into a living person! - Raven_paw1237mthตอบกลับถึง knighteaster
Ima scream louder than my sister when she breaks my eardrums
The lithe leopard ran over from the grass that had corpses strewn across the ground, jumped into the air, and suddenly transformed into a naked man. He was tall and slender, but he was highly flexible. His feet, which maintained his running posture, landed lightly and agilely on the ground. Then, with a few jumps, he arrived on the tree, his golden eyes staring intently at Bai Qingqing. - Raven_paw1237mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
And possibly become his lunch later.
Although the battle hadn't ended, Bai Qingqing felt relieved. She knew that the leopard would definitely win. - Raven_paw1239mthตอบกลับถึง Sadvac22Ch 14 Another Somewhat Free for All
- Raven_paw1239mthตอบกลับถึง Sadvac22Ch 14 Another Somewhat Free for All
- Raven_paw1239mthตอบกลับถึง LStar_334
You're still loved.
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Raven_paw1239mthตอบกลับถึง LStar_334
So I've heard.
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Raven_paw1231yrตอบกลับถึง AMonarch
- Raven_paw1231yrตอบกลับถึง Shadow_Magus
- Raven_paw1231yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 1 Death
- Raven_paw1231yrตอบกลับถึง Junni_MC
- Raven_paw1231yrแปะแล้ว
I like it. It's really good. But I have this kind of pet peeve where people just speed the things. On the last few lines, I'll be honest, I'd probably write it so that while the character is walking to the room, he is also thinking. But that's my opinion. Overall, I love the story. Keep up the good work. 🙂
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