StormCrow420

as of the latest chapter (80) I've noticed that the author seems to want to get away from a cultivation novel and I think it's a good idea especially because Cards are a great idea. and the way cards are used here is really unique I love it!

And to make life abit easier once you're done writing and want to edit everything go on chatgpt and write : edit this. It will fix the grammar and spelling .

I suggest rather than rewriting and publish it from chapter 252 and up I think it's best to edit the chapters and put them in. Btw I have a book too I started re edit all my chapters again because the writing is bad XD. I haven't published the edits yet though I'm being lazy XD. keep it up. I like the idea of this novel. Even though the writing was not up to my standards I still read the whole book. GG

To all new readers. Start from chapter 252 That's where the rewritten version starts. The chapters bellow 252 have horrible quality. <3

I mean 250 chapters

I finished reading the whole thing. It's only 25 chapters as after chapter 25 the author decided to rewrite the story which means that after 250 the story goes back to chapter 1 because the writer wants to make the story flawless . It is a good idea but the execution is not very good. Lots of shocking people for some reason. I loved the Godzilla King Kong evolution. Especially godzilla. Planet creation is in depth which I loved. But the interaction between the characters are too shallow. The Mc doesn't have enough depth to it. He feels like a side character. These points can be improved as the writer rewrites the story . As for the competitions please be abit more creative. I loved the survival aspect of the protoss ark please make more of that style[img=update]

Chapter 927 + I need a hero song = perfection

Chrystaline 12 headed celestial dragons

I love the world idea and the story idea. But first off translation 3/10 I'm sorry but I have to be honest . Second the whole story so far has been developing another xia dynasty and just shocking people. Third Mc character development is close to zero. As much as I love the idea the story is empty. It takes 200+ chapters to get into a university which is BULLSH1T. we I might just steal the idea of making a world within the body and use it in my novel.

Devil may cry