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Good start kinda feels like rick riordan novels though

Good but always heard its better to give more detail

Great piece of work done, the writing is sublime and the story is very good. Keep going author, don't know why you don't have more views though

Really is a great work, the writing is amazing, the world-building is quite something, to say the least as it is very special. You seem to update fairly frequently at that and you can really explain the characters well.

Well first off the explaination of the world background needs to be addressed, and i’d like it if you gave more detail into how characters, backgrounds and objects looked but other than that the writing is pretty great and you update quite consistently ffrom what I can see. So just keep going

Bro sounds like his on some coke😂

Great start, writing is great but confusing at times. Characters are great and a great first chapter.

Writing is great, story and chaacters are good has a lot of potential

Very good read, writing is awesome and the characters are very nice, hope to see more chapters