Axel_Ash
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The plot is too much strong and the characterisation is also good, the arrangements of the scenes are extraordinary. but Joey where is he why do you ignore him, I am waiting for Joey.
I love princess stories. your story is my favourite story. and moreover, I love your strong plot. in your main idea, readers will get a strong clue about your story.
The start of your story is super good, the plot is very strong, and the main idea of the story creates curiosity. I hope you will complete it. I want more...