Pilotfranco

Yep

I’m more confused now, so you are introducing a foreign source into danmachi, mana not mind and still labeling it as magic under the falna. Arthur was only able to teach her because the core already existed, in tbate the core is scadered and as they age it forms together by itself Arthur just sped up the process of which. The people of danmachi don’t have cores so he can’t speed up a process that doesn’t exist. Teaching bell doesn’t makes sense either as bell will naturally gain his own magic on his own

Hate how dirty they do him in the fics, dude was a solid Naruto character. I mean kinda weak but still

How can he teach bell if the reason he has magic is the magic core, magic isn’t something you learn without either a grimore or elf chants. Please explain if you understand it cause I don’t

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He awakened them when he and hashirama had to separate, there are no specific ages mentioned but I’d assume like 10-13 range as they looked young but not as young as their sibling counter parts

He tweeted that shit like a year ago

That’s just not true though, kishimoto himself said that luffy has surpassed naruto by a bit, as in one of the strongest person in Naruto verse is weaker than upper strength person one piece. He’s stronger and faster that’s all you really need in both verses to win. All the otsutsuki have is fancy abilities that’s it

Writing quality 2/5 Update stability 3/5 Story development 2/5 Character development 1/5 World backround 3/5 Shit isn’t good gang, the mc is mad cringe. Forget that first off there isn’t any structure to the mcs ability, it seems like the mc as a whole is the issue. He looks like kakashi so the mc reasons that he has all of kakashi abilities, ah yes a reasonable assumption. wtf, no. Then there is mad stupid ass shit too build up the mcs character but it doesn’t accomplish that at all, like why even write some of this shit. It’s mad unnecessary, like he had the mc go to a job interview and had the mc go hungry to find out that he can last 3 days without food and still be decent. Suprise us normal people can do that too, it’s not special. It doesn’t establish him as supernaturally sturdy. All the interaction are weird and just cringey, I honestly don’t even know where to start in describing this problem. Frankly this is a horrible fic that disgraces kakashi as a character might as well have done a reincarnated in jjk with a sharigan, and made the character a cliche white haired teen. The mc doesn’t follow kakashi personality or bearing or ability beside the sharigan, just copying the edgy mask, but that shit is corny without the bearing and nonchalance to back it making it “cool”. The quality of the writing isn’t good either, a lot of grammatical errors.

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