Pilotfranco
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Ya and not all of them were strong look at zetsu he was a s rank solely for his spying abilities
I can plank for 8 minutes even the fittest marines I know only got 20 minutes except that monster who has hours 40 min for a untrained kid he’ll nah
If you make a oc to replace rudeus then don’t follow the story word for word like the cannon I’ve seen to many story’s where it’s cannon but under another name the only difference being the oc is more of a pervert than the legendary per himself
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Rank of rebel doesn’t represent strength more so risk so these are probably elite jonin or sum that knows a secret or two jonin weren’t weak
? Rudy should be born right now, the author states he figured out where he was based of the mention of Roxy who only came to the village when Rudy needed at teacher. Is the author stupid
I’m just saying princess amedala is around
Even in Star Wars they didn’t explore or find every planet or star maps of old were simply lost. There could also be law in interfering with barbaric planets. In the mcu case it’s a lot bigger than shown and light travel is still slow so travel to known planets don’t exlore much I believe. Star Wars travel was beyond light speed so travel makes since but mcu is kinda grey area
Very slow is an understatement a single second spans 1000 seconds or 16.7 minutes 1/4 and hour all for a second. Movements which be so slow you wouldn’t even notice
What anime is this again
Shit mc- mc just smokes weed and is a loner, those are his sole defining factors. Weed is mentioned a lot like wtf, smoking is something that’s casual and yet the author brings it up a lot. Story development- ya so there is the usual girls fall for no reason trash you’d see in most fics but here the mc is weird about it too, he asked Leah’s dad to date? Why, that isn’t traditional it’s extra, dating is to get to know the person. Marriage is where you’d ask the dad. He promises Jessica that he’d date/marry he if she wants in 5 years. His whole relationship with rose is just weird af. There’s a system btw, ya I know why. It’s mentioned a few time here and there but there isn’t really any point in it, it’s like it was added but the author either forgot or has it as an afterthought. Either way the fic is shit, complete garbage.
It’s writen well, the updates aren’t frequent, the story development is shit ( the story has plot holes that are massive and I’ve asked questions about and didn’t get a response on so development is slow af also) character development is alright like it’s Percy so how can you fuck it up so, the world backround is meh as I said plot holes, a lot of which revolve around the worlds lore and Percy Jackson lore.
“Football American” those people huh. I see how it is
How did the band pierce his arm. Percy at this point should have the Styx curse still so… it being a magic item wouldnt explain since magic is a lesser form of divinity and the divine couldnt harm Percy in the battle of New York so…