World spoon. literally

it's a basic trick with the man wanting something from the woman when he's in the bathroom, and instead of the object, he'll just grab her kekeke.

it's not like he didn't say that she'll be the 5th girl, so... you are just adding those things for nothing, really. Just extra

tbh I don't really care. why bother making them like this if you get them to rei? it's just disgusting. it's a ff, man, so..

kakuzu: money hidan: rituals

so 12+? from warrior state? or 14-15 from 2nd war? kekeke

kinda boring with multiverse if it's not Slice Of Life with smut and shet. I liked the naruto one cus he wasn't a wuzzy and all that, so it was okoo

all

5k+ if you can, even 10k kekeke

it's basic psychological fact

+1 ngl nicesu. nextto naruto

neither

better 3rd pov than side character povs ngl.

mm, it's getting intense to the point of not carrying about anything in that moment. like "it's just a baby" subconsciously ignoring that'll be yours

it's just sad, that's all. I wouldn't care if it was a one night stand, but not in a relationship... cus, you know, one has a short lifespan like a fly compared to a turtle of 200+ and counting

writing quality 3 stars, the rest 1. I can't say that I enjoyed half of the novel, so I was thinking about leaving more stars for the author, but I can't. my dude is good with his wifes, I don't have a problem with that. my problem is with his character development and his stupidity. I get that he gets polite with women, but, man, I don't know exactly how to say it, so here's how it is: - Mc screams his skills like a 3rd villain - Mc talks like a 3rd villain unnecessarily, like he's gonna say that he'll beat X, that he'll do X, bla, bla - Mc doesn't kill enemies like Naruto, where he literally needs his women form (he got a race like that one from to love ru) and still can't eliminate them cus idk, ask the author. - and cream of the crop: Mc weak af with his mentality (even though he's not a human anymore and I can't believe he isn't drown in his instinct of a superior lifeform like the infinite dragon) and he's still weak. (the last string: Yuri + he's abusing yami, his wife, doing it with a foking slave for 5+ chapters already, even though she's a girl. she's a criminal, ffs)

I don't really care. just go back, mate. it's a waste of time if it's not from the original tbh. don't forget to make him more ruthless, man. he already got evil kazu, can't you see that he's too stupid? it's really annoying 🙄

nt, tho I would love if you can make him kill his enemies, pls. plsssssssssssss.

I don't really like the mc, tbh. he's ok, just overly pussey where he needs to man up

just let it be, man... it's getting annoying, Author. she literally wanted to use them like how she'll be used in prison. it's a fitting experience for someone like her