DarkFight3r

Why talk all about this OP system and then nerf it! I hate when this happens. Also a lot of talking and nothing happening. For these short chapters you need at least 50-60 free chapters.

what a useless system and why yapp about all this system only to be nerfed immidiatly. This is so annoying!! If you talk about having a OP system and then also use it, dont just nerf it!

never mind i thougt this novel is going to be all about business and not a copy of all the others that start of like this but end up with fantasy and cultivation elements. Why always add some random enemies everytime you finish one enemy another one that is stronger pops up?! Its always the same with these kinds of novel never anything new!

you can not mix your personal money from stock market earnings with the companies earnings!! The company has to be profitable on its own and such a company may have 20-30% profit margin. This way you write it the company would go bankrupt in real life!!

where does this money come from?

Very interesting book but man is the grammar awful. To the author: You should take a bit of time to reread your sentences or run it through some sort of programm. I know there are free ones on the internet.

make the dicision!

Please proofread your chapters! The grammar is getting worse!

to see you cry like this

The story is really great, but I dont know if this is just a translation or a real author. The grammar is really bad! Please for the love of god, please check your work or have a proofreader go over it!! Always messing up she/he and so on even missing words. This novel would go to an other level if you just fix the grammar mistakes.