What are you doing author?! -)I didn't expect a Novel of top tier to be like this. -)The fighting scenes are boring and bland -)why can't you specify how an attact or spell effects the background or something or how each ranking increases his fire power -) Whenever there is a fight scene you just mention that he fought with sword or something or used spell to deal the enemies but you don't mention how the spell works in a area like does it destroy 10m or 100m something except in very very few cases like when World Will's decent. -)If you dont mention something like this then its like someone is playing a game and is just giving certain command,not the realistic type i am searching for. -) Please Author do it in this type and your novel will become more interesting to read

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seriously😂

continue please

Yes this one is better than previous one

Hello Author, The grammar quality is good enough to read without issue but the problem is when people are in conversation no emotions conveyed at many or almost all chapters like for example if Eric speaks or his friends speaks they just say like amber said-----eric said------bro please write the emotion by which they are speaking like if they smiling while speaking or indifferently or coldly oe sadly like anything bro please just add the emotion just because of this i had to drop this 3 times then again continue after sometimes of there are any improvements.please author do improve it.Yours loyal reader.

hello?

how? what does bai lion has?

In my opinion if mrs rajput dies then it will be better for Rudra as he will get strong and will get the determination to get stronger plus she was also kind of baggage to him as only 1.5 years left till the main event so only few things are there that he can do by all himself. well it may be my biased POV but no offense 🙅🏻‍♂️. Peace ☮️✌🏻