Oof... Let me guess, got criticized for script format as well?

Thanks!

Thanks! If you manage to stick around for Volume 2, I promise that asides from the format, and a new main character, nothing has changed.

Hey, thanks!

This webnovel is actually pretty good. I only want to suggest that if possible, you should also update on weekends as well since from what I've heard, doing that, is actually quite recommendable. I got kind of lost in some parts, and sometimes I don't know if a character is talking or not. If a character talks, try to use "" ok? But this has potential, and, hey, 4.8/5 stars? That pretty much means you are very beloved, so keep up the good work for the audience!

I... Can't imagine that, actually.

Thanks, GMS!

This is an amazing webnovel. Please read it if you are into action, and I hope it becomes more known in this page. The updates are stable, the writing is near perfect, the development of the story is interesting, I can notice which characters are which, and it's an interesting world.

Oh, it's alright!

It's... Mid Tier for me. It is hard to follow, and the updates, which, the webnovel has just started, can't be properly judged. However I found the characters... Good. I suggest updating every chapter a day, make it easier to follow, explore more of the world, and it is good to go.

Thanks. In case you haven't read the warning, I clarified Volume 2 fixed this.

Yes. CPU Volume 1 takes place in 2008.

Thanks Brian! I actually have this paragraph problem fixed by the next Volume 2 of Synthwave and the rest of my work! I don't know if I can help you a lot since I am not a huge expert on Avatar.

Yes, yes he is.

I have a question regarding the second point: If the average chapter of a novel is in between 1500 words and 2000 words, does it mean that author is on the right track, despite some chapters having less than 1500 words?

If by that sentence you were also referring to your novel.

This is the best fic on Webnovel I read since the first three chapters of Red Blood Century. The writing quality is excelent, the updates are stable, the MC is interesting as heck, I love the direction where this is going, and this story has a unique way of viewing the world. Read it. It's the second Webnovel I gave five stars.

Uh-oh.

Why do I get the feeling this is somewhat becoming meta?

Probably because the director wants a Gus Fring type of character, someone friendly at first glance, but deep down is an emotionless drug lord.