Withe_Reaper

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From what I read of the story it seems to be an interesting story, I noticed some basic mistakes both grammatical and sentence construction, but also English is not the author's first language.

I really liked the story, a very original idea and very well written, I look forward to reading more, I hope the author continues to write.

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The story has an interesting premise. I recommend everyone to read even the first chapters. World-building is good. I think there are a few chapters, but apart from that, it's great.

An interesting story for those who like to imagine beautiful love stories, although it is not my type of reading, I recommend reading it if you like love stories.

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the story will now develop a little faster, in the next chapters I will give a brief explanation of the skills and how to get them

I really liked the story, I got the idea that the story was a mix between fantasy and science fiction, I hope I can read more chapters, so keep doing what you are doing

I found the story interesting, I recommend you read at least a few chapters before deciding whether you like it or not. I hope the author continues to write.