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Something something meow =^..^= To the PTB, I'm ready for my reincarnation now... setting : Eastern Historical Romance please, cheers! Not the FL though, I'm more good-for-nothing! ^^
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I hate giving bad reviews and normally I'm a "if you can't say anything nice, stay silent" kinda girl but this is... hmmm, the only thing promising is the plot. Think you used to wrong year, it's not set in 1991 or 1980. Too many spelling mistakes, wrong words being used (taught instead of thought), using abbreviations i.e. thou, not capitalising the start of sentences or the start of speech, in fact hardly using any capital letters at all, not for names or anything. Sorry love, I appreciate the effort you made writing this but it's not easy to read and I would not pay for this, let alone use free fps I spent time to get, the 20 minutes from reading it for the fp reward was enough for me as I don't think it would improve the more chapters I read. Sorry. 😞
Me again, sorry, I'm tired and chatty! King Desmond... there is an oldish British sitcom called The Desmonds which has a character called Pork Pie... yes, it's also a food, pork pies are so nice!! Mira reminds me of my friend Krasimira, not a food, just a really lovely friend with a pretty name and nickname! *munches on Ferrero Rocher* ^^
I think that the Aion stone brought the ancestor of the king and the Rose Knight (a female) together in the past and it's doing the same thing now between Maximus and errrr, the FL (can't remember her name, only remembered his because of Gladiator). She sees his ancestor in her dreams as wispy is still sharing her body so her soul is still intact and the way I read it, he wasn't surprised that she had a stance of a Knight, so he probably has seen her ancestor in his dreams... since he was a young boy maybe. That's what I think anyway, it's no doubt wrong! ^^