M_Static

guys i'm lost here. Sirius black is Free, so why dementors in hogwarts?

jap craven

i don't get it why they call it "punishment". he was just disqualified that's all. and he don't need to prove anything to anyone.

yep to comm below. i'm done.

I feel like 'meeeh'...

cmooooon finish alrdy

quite delusional guy... again why ATs don't bother to create mc's personality when mc have madara's template

mcu! have few suggestions 1st. never reveal mc real identity even if you last till the end of ff, let him be a mystery no one else knows him or his face except one person. Cause in all mcu ff shield or any other shit one way or another will know mc identity. 2nd give him sm friend or gf who knows his identity and do the job with him, not a fencesitters. in this hp ff yep he have close ones but he essentially doing everything himself. For reference i recommend to read "super detective in the fictional world" it worth it.

white knight syndrome...

annoying... chapters are short and tons of nonsense, mc is wooden block, tons of unnecessary system info for works count. awkward.