Newbie_Mistake

Good chapter

Good chapter

Then what it the price of choosing the other one. It shown he will get stronger even with no side effect!

I like the novel and how it was progressing. But the Contract to me sound like slavery even though slavery wasn't written.

A very good story i most say, it start fresh with description of event very easy to understand. The battle scene left more to be desired but Julius truly had a good head over his shoulder due to his strategic mind. I haven't read that far but if what was started with was continued we will have one of the best Kingdom building novels. Give it a try, you won't regret it.

It is a very good read, I might say; it has fewer chapters by now, but the story flows smoothly with a great action-packed description that gives you great visuals (Especially the fight between Navyn and Ceaser). I do hope that during system displays the attributes and other descriptions will be spaced out for easier reading (That is why Writing Quality has 1 star less) Apart from that, the System is unique, better than most that I have seen, and I can see the author is cooking something amazing with it, which might surprise us. The overall story type wasn't new in Webnovel, but most of the time, it was the execution that truly made a good story, and this has a good execution to my taste. Even though I see that he was somewhat using screenplay and movie format in some of his scenes I didn't find it jarring to read or get confused (This is where we have shown where the Titan was with Jack and Naman and then we have flashed back on what happened before then we were back to the scene. Usually it won't come in that order) There was another scene, too, during Jack and Ceaser's fight, but to me, it add layers of good storytelling to a degree. Another thing that I want to add is the realistic situation and the sense of foreboding and helplessness other characters feel. It was a good display. I'm not a fan of too much death, but the fact Carol lost her child just after saving him with the nanny makes me think that the Apocalypse isn't joking around. But I'm more interested in Jack's character development. Will he be a generic arrogant system user who stream roll everything with a grin or be a complex character that we will hate and love? Hopefully, it will be great.

Ceaser allowed the MC to grow, and now he is dead. Now you are making Naaman to allow to grow just for him to die? While Naaman has indeed shown that he knew the strength of Jack System. Why make him arrogant like Ceaser? It felt like...

It rarely to come across story that will captivate you from the very beginning. I'm impressed, i look forward on how the story progresses.

Great Chapter.

maybe throw this into glossary. As when the novel premium, it mean reader will pay to read it which is not very convenient.