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Thank you!

Sorry, Im confused how come those gangsters didn’t notice he wasn’t wearing anything? Did i miss something?

Actually someone needs to write a story on webnovel about this. It would be fun lol

Okay i searched it: Newbie, newb, noob, noobie, n00b or nub is a slang term for a novice or newcomer, or somebody inexperienced in a profession or activity. Untill now I haven t heard about noobie just noob and thought it meant being bad at a game(also new)

Thank you. I know my answer to you is a bit late so sorry for that. I repeat myself again if I sound like im telling you what to do i dont meant it that way. I actually didn t read this story since i wrote my last review so if something changed and i don t know just say it and i will remove my review. I still feel like there are too many blank spaces in the story. I have many times already seen people writing hate comments to authors about things that are actually explained. What i want to say that there are people like that and umm.. sorry for this but to me there are too many of them like if st the time he was leaving the village at least there would have been something like "He looked back at the village and kept looking at it with a blank face for a while before he looked away and continued walking." or something like that would be far enough. The main reason i probably haven t questioned things is cuz the story is has been written in first person(dont even think about rewriting, thinking about it hurts). Im writing you here instead of the discord server so others that are thinking about reading this don t ask again the same questions and you don t need to answer as many questions. ... You forgot to answer about the pirate girl(you dont need to) Will the main character get some companions and will this turn into a harem?(I know there weren t any indications) Well that s it do not stop writing the story has great potential and i love the little things like explaining controlled explosion and so on.[img=recommend]

I forgot to say that this story has potential to become a top novel on this site and for the reason why i only wrote bad things in my review is that when im searching in the reviews im always searching for bad reviews. Well thats it

Too lazy to write a review. MAYBE A BIT SPOILER but you will know this from ch1 . . . . A bit clisé but far of the level that vampire system had. There s only 25 ch but it seems the MC has it s own way of serving justice by killing everyone... he wants to kill everyone cuz he thinks thats the righ decion maybe he will change.. I dunno just read the 1ch to its half and you will know if you want to read this.

Cut him some slack he is a kid at that a malnourished one! Look at herry potter he s eleven

same here

Hate when someone talks like this "we, humans and so on.." even in videos talking about how much garbage is in "our seas" in this case its even contradictory. I just want to say there are lot lot and lot of nice People out there and these things are embeding in our minds "we" are bad while it s not true. Don t know about you but take a class in school with 20 people in worse cases there is 5 people that aren t okay in their heads and are bullying and stuff but what about the other 75%? People aren t bad at all ad yet everywhere i hear "we"... and sorry for my little outburst