I am thinking of doing a mix up of comics, but with the MCU timeline as I am more familiar with it Do you any advice? For example, how the battle of new York could have gone differently if there were comic elements? My knowledge of Marvel Comics is shallow at best, so I am not confident By the way, what is the difference between Jean Grey of the movies and the comics? The Phoenix is the personification of life, death and rebirth in both, right? Isn't every cosmic entity the same in each universe in the Marvel multiverse? I feel like there would be no difference as both are concepts in the same multiverse, and so, I am not sure why Adam should stay away from her. After all, it is a bit early in the timeline, and he won't bother the Phoenix, so he should be in no danger, right?

But he can still get stronger and eventually copy these powers. For example, in marvel, He can copy Rogue's mutant ability for a start, and also Darwins reactive adaptation quite easily. Perhaps they are not abilities that would work on higher beings, but they are great for the start, and as long as he step by step gets abilities, I think he will eventually get to the point where he can beat those powerful beings Though, I am not sure Rimuru himself is smart enough to do that. I mean, Ciel could probably do that for him, but he also has to put the effort, and use his abilities smartly to achieve that And again, I am not saying Rimuru can beat every fictional character out there. I just believe that his abilities allow him to grow and become stronger very fast. If you put him in a dangerous verse, and as long he uses his abilities smartly and doesn't instantly die, he can rapidly power up to match the other powerful beings of that verse

Ugh, don't get me started with Marvel comics. To be honest, I know that have to do research since Jean Grey exists in my fan fiction, and I want to know marvel more in depth for Adam's adventure in that verse Still though, I feel like Rinuru, who has Azazoth and Ciel, can get a lot stronger in the Marvel Universe. It seems to me that Rimuru has really high potential for growth because of his skills, so wherever you place him, he can grow stronger by devouring and analyzing stuff But anyway, verses similar to Marvel... I can think of a few, as DC, SCP, and Lovecraft of course immediately come to mind. There are also probably novel worlds out there with some pretty high levels of growth Again, I have not finished the web novel or the light novel of Tensura, so I am not sure how powerful Rimuru is. But I still feel like, if you put him in Marvel and other over powered verses, he could get a lot of stronger. For example, in Marvel, he could devour the infinity Stones ( if that doesn't work, he can just get Ciel to analyze them), he can also devour other over powered items and beings, so even if he can't be compared to OAA, the beyonder and similar beings, he can probably catch up to them fairly quickly

I dont have anything to add, as frankly, I much prefer silently pondering your replies, and how to incorporate them, and also trying to adopt such ideas when making new chapters. However- <Adam will certainly not lose himself to power> <He won't trade away his emotions and feelings, even for omnipotence. He values the ability to enjoy life, and doesn't think it is worth it to exchange such a privilege for something which will make all of it meaningless> You can say that this is my blue truth, at least that is something which delves inside my head, and is kept in mind for this fan fiction- though I am not sure if it can be properly conveyed in such a way that the readers can understand Adam's mentality clearly ....Though, this is more of a fact than a 'theory' which can be sliced with the red truth. But still, what you said has certainly implanted some ideas within me, and I do want to explore this thought process, but again, I don't want to make too much of a big deal out of it, and make it more exaggerated as obviously, true omnipotence is... too far away from this fan fiction, especially the one you described which is absolutely

Oof, that is a great idea! It would be so interesting to see the reactions of the biblical faction to him. It would also be interesting to see how that 'will' hidden in the True longinus will react to Adam, since he can indeed be considered 'Adam, father of humanity' due to the template.

But didn't Tanjiro become the demon king at the end to deal with Muzan? And his sister also became a demon, and pretty sure she was one oft he reasons that they defeated him

Didn't he become boundless tier at the end of the webnovel? And I am pretty sure that I heard somewhere that the light novel intended to continur in a direction that would make him as strong as the outer gods

Price of omnipotence from a writing perspective? I think it is too long of a way to to think about this matter But if had to answer, it would depend. Are we talking about absolute omnipotence? Because there are different levels to the omnis, and most are not absolute. Multiverse, Omniverse, and there is also the Outerverse which I know little about, each is a step up, and I'm sure that true omnipotence that encompasses all is difficult And well, if it was possible, I guess it would make a story boring, but that also depends. But it would indeed eliminate all tension from a story, as by that point, I think it would just be better to either focus on slice of life,or make an epilogue and just end the story, because achieving true omnipotence would just leave it dull and hollow, without any purpose propelling it forward

That is a great method, however, it would take a lot of time. And I also believe she can figure this out by herself, and since she did something harder with Adam's help, it would be far easier on her

Well, that is at least what Adam thinks Personally, I could spin some b*llsh*t on how she unlocked her Semblance and not her Aura by herself, and then unlock her Aura when she is in battle Though, I am not sure if that approach is the best choice. Do you have any suggestions?

Thank you for your reasonable criticism. Indeed, Adam's relationship with the females of the Chat Group had progressed quickly, and there weren't many scenes to develop their relationship, but I suppose that is my fault and failure as an author. However, I feel like you have misunderstood something. It was never confirmed in this fan fiction that Rimuru is the reincarnation of Veldanava. Sure, Adam did speculate for whether Rimuru is a reincarnation or an inheritor to Veldanava, but nothing was ever confirmed, and he himself doesn't know. Beyond that... Well, I tried to keep Rimuru's personality roughly the same. But since she is a woman in this fan fiction, she is bound to be different than in the original, and it is difficult to potray her personality reasonably with the same flavor as in Canon when all her previous' life experiences were different

Other ideas? Hm, there are some ideas that a reader has suggested to make this arc more interesting, and the whole thing with Merlot was one of them The Schnee Semblance is genetic, Adam could copy it. Though I am not sure, semblances are basically soul-based, and the Schnee semblance is genetic-based? It is a bit confusing, but I guess something could be done about this Maybe he can also figure out how to copy other Semblances without eating the owner's soul. Perhaps not their semblances whole, but Adam could analyze how they work with the help of [Great Sage] and mimic them with his power Fiona Thyme, that sheep girl in Atlas, has a pocket storage. Soul-based pocket storage could be useful. Though he already has [Stomach], it could be used as research value, and for future reference for other things At the battle of Atlas, Adam could also 'borrow' Atlesian Airships and other tech. They aren't that advanced compared to honkai tech, but they are a different technology tree from another world, so they should have some value for research. And it could also be a nice gift to Welt or Bronya when she becomes the Herrscher of Reason Eating Ozma and his accumulated memories, skills and experience would be something he'd probably accept. Especially if he gets a promise of Adam to defeat Salem, and shows proof that he could indeed kill her permanently I do not know about that Ever After stuff and the Fantasy Tree as I don't have enough knowledge of Rwby, but it could be an interesting addition. Thought I am not sure how to implement them, and what role they would have in this arc Apparently, there's also a robot golem thing that can reforge people's souls? Not sure if that is true, I have researched it, but found nothing Those are the ideas another reader suggested, and I think they are enough to make this trip throughout Remnant quite eventful. Probably not all of the above could be implemented, but they have great reference value

Again, old habits die hard. Still, he will stop caring about being human, but I feel like his conflict is needed to be shown. For roughly 30 years combined from both of his lives he was human, and it would be really weird if he became used to being something else right away, it would seem as if his character is too robotic Again, he will stop caring eventually as he is not a human supremacist or something stupid like that, but it would need some time getting used to his new state of being

I want to say... You truly cooked on this one, just like the idea with Ophis I don't want to say much, I'll just have to figure out the specifics, since you've already gave me a direction to work with And well, what you've suggested doesn't really conflict with anything I had planned previously. So for now, are there any other significant locations that Adam can visit? I feel like, that in addition to that temporary goal, Adam also needs to encounter one event for the places he visits. It is not one that he knew would happen before that, but one that happens to occur near him, and he decides to intervene. It would be much more interesting that way, since it would add some spice to his travels

Good proposal. However, there is a problem with Merlot himself. I don't think his personality is suitable for travelling around with Adam, and it would be hard to get him to agree Also, not sure what more could be done in regards of exploring Menagerie. I feel like aimless travels would do no good. And of course, even if Adam goes sightseeing around Menagerie, I'm not sure what to write, and how to not make it boring

Not sure. We are basically in the end game of this Arc at this point, so it shouldn't last much longer. All there is to do would be to defeat Salem, but I don't know how many chapters it would take for that to happen

Are you saying this because Vishnu can 'devour and evolve infinitely'? ...But well, no. This are his thoughts, and this is his own personal opinion and perspective on perfection

I suppose that is a good choice. But both? As in, both Ishtar Rin, and normal Rin? My personal favorite? Well... it is quite difficult to choose only one. But if I had to choose my favorite girl from fate... It would either be Tamamoe-no-mae ... Or Sakura, and both for me too. As Kama is included in the package as Sakura is her vessel

Based on my understanding of you.... The answer is definitely to make this arc more meaningful, or to make the 'cycle of hatred' more defined, and make Adam aware of the consequences of his actions, as his involvement indirectly lead to that Lion's death, and subsequently the birth of this Grimm .... Or something above those lines.

Thanks for your review, I didn't expect to get complimented on the characters and world building, but I appreciate it nonetheless! ... And of course, Fate is 'fated' to be included. But only when he gets strong enough, as we don't want him to get beaten up by the counter force or something even more terrifying, now do we?