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so much gay baiting, such a waste of time

pretty sure the dude doesn't know what consent is either

this dude is fucking disgusting, she should just kill him

truly utterly uninteresting, gonna have to skip my way through this bs

I'm really not sure i can give this story anymore of my time, this is just another disappointing chapter. I might come back after I've let a few chapters release so I can just skip the unimportant ones. I'm really disappointed in the author

I'd really enjoy a catch up with Maria, and how she is doing. feels a bit like she was abandoned as a character

tbh not the biggest of the pov of her parents, personally just not a fan of reading about hetro couples. maybe try a pacing shift, the last few chapters seems to be a bit on the filler side than progressing any sort of story

pretty sure I could have just skipped this chapter and it wouldn't affect my understanding of the story in any way. you don't need to do a chapter each of its just gonna be filled

keep up the good work

you just need to work on your prose, the idea is solid