SHADILLAC09

I love this story! But can we land deals with the merit of the movies as opposed to this heart strings skill? I feel like the Mc works hard just to jedi mind trick people into being on his side or seeing his point of view. It just makes me think why not just jedi mind trick all influential movie mogul and get whatever you want. The heartstrings skill just feels like it cheapens the MCs achievements a bit because he still has to use it after making hundreds of millions in the box office.

Please come back 😭😭😭

The more you read this the harder it becomes to read. The author forgets the sequence of events in the mcu, he forgets what he has written in the older chapters, and Mc doesn't do anything but worship Tony stark the entire novel. He can copy ANY ability but he is just worried about what Tony is doing. He gets blown up in a lab, eager to get back to work for Tony, has all these combat skills, still afraid of his own shadow. After he gets all these combat skills he is deathly afraid of a hot redhead? Especially since he is not supposed to know the true depths of her skills. The Mc shows no growth or potential and has no creativity to improve himself with. At some point it just feels like the author is writing the same chapters over and over again. All previous conversations are forgotten and he is reiterating the same thoughts and emotions. As it is right now I don't recommend reading this.

You write about killing people by the dozens without blinking an eye. But homosexuality is where you draw the line? Come on man you don't need to invent dumb reasons, you can just tell us that you are dropping the fic.

This reason is so random that I can't tell if the author is being serious.

I am a HUGE fan of this fanfic! If you are checking to reviews to see if this will be worth your time, then I highly suggest you give it a shot. This fic is fan-fucking-tastic! The author blends AC lore, skills, and abilities into the HP universe with ease while telling a compelling story with realistic and believable changes to the canon events. As soon as I started, I spent the better part of the last 2 days devouring all available chapters(66). I cant wait to see what the MC does next. It is clear I like the story very much but there were some points of disappointments. Such as the removal of Gilderoy Lockhart in the second year. I was SOOOOO looking forward to see how the MC would deal with the attention seeking fraud of a professor. This is not a knock to the author's writing or storytelling ability. Just a personal preference. My only other point of disappointment would be the fact that I am now caught up and must wait for chapters to be released while my mind races with ideas of how more AC abilities and techniques will be used in the future. Thank you author for the great story. I am off to search to see if there are other AC related fanfics after reading this.

I just binged all the available chapts. This story has great direction so far. I am curious to see where this story goes!!

The Cadmus Arc is over but we didnt mention Red Arrow and Match. I was hoping to see Red Arrow get rescued and for all of his clones to be identified. Are we saving that for an interesting Arc later on?

Welcome back author!

I am on chpt 5***