earthydragonsly

i want to recommend something but you don't need to listen to it after all this is your novel any I would recommend that you add more slice of life scenes like how they train how they spar morgan and the girls studying and them bantering and morgan helping the girls and the girls becoming a message because of how close morgan is to them and add how kuroka and vali disturb her and rile her up basically all I'm saying is add more slice of life scenes thx for reading my ted talk

love it so far and hope to see more of it but I'm curious with the sacred gears she gets is she able to unlock balance breaker in all of them if so i would recommend not giving her balance breaker cuz her powers should have some draw backs but u don't have to listen to me just write what you want and I'm gonna love it anyway

People are saying 'Oh, MC should have become a multiversal being.' Like, have you read Marvel? I've read a bit, but from what I've seen, no mortal has ever become something like the Living Tribunal or TOAA. And bro, then he would stop being Spider-Man! Honestly, I like that this fanfic's MC is not going to become a god—there are already too many of those out there, especially in cultivation novels. If you do like stuff like that, then try the Percy Jackson fanfic from this author. It's pretty good so author please don't make him a god leave him as your friendly neighborhood spider btw i read somewhere that the reason why spiderman can't learn magic was because they were spider totems or am i wrong

akeno and yasaka or if iIdont want akeno then I would suggest suzaku her cousin

Lavina and suzaku from slash dogs if possible

I have a feeling someone is gonna die

yes pls continue

love it so far I'm a huge monster hunter fan so was wondering if ur gonna add any monster from the other games and iIhope mc doesn't join astera like both her and the hunters respect each other but don't involve with each other and would be cool if the hunter is struggling mc comes and the both work together and then split something like that if iImakes sense

if my guess is right most likely next chapter yuno will meet aki they might reconcile and merge into one person or mabye yuno might inherit aki time as her but I'm hoping for them to merge it will fix the whole weak sohl thing that aki had and author please if u are merging them together please add kisara too so that seto and kisara can be together through yuno and seto

it's the chick in the first episode