Jackleell

There is no R18 content as far as I’ve seen. Additionally, the translation is bad, and it’s hard to enjoy the story without feeling annoyed while reading it because it feels off. However, it’s not as bad as other translations. The chapters are short, and the main character is boring.

This novel was great for the first 100 chapters, but after that, it went downhill really fast. It became slow-paced, boring, and just slice-of-life. As for the system, the protagonist only signed in twice, and aside from getting the three different types of Haki off-screen, there’s nothing else. Overall, the novel has become unbearable to read after 100 chapters and is just plain boring.

This novel is promising, but I’d suggest rewriting it because the chapters are too short and boring. Also, the MC feels bland—his power is supposed to be equal to Zenos, yet he’s still being pushed around by the Grand Priest for some reason, and he does nothing about it. I understand he just woke up, also the writing feels like it was done by an AI.

This novel seems promising, but I want to let you know moving forward—please don’t drag this story out like other novels, such as the Van Helsing systems novel. It’s over 600 chapters, yet the story doesn’t go anywhere, and it becomes repetitive and boring. So far, the first 20 chapters were promising, and I’ll keep reading, but I hope it doesn’t become dull.

Also, the ruins part feels like it will take another 300 chapters. I don’t have time to waste on this novel if it’s this slow-paced and isn’t going anywhere. Man, this novel could have been so good. Sigh. You really need to learn how to shorten unnecessary things because it’s boring as hell to read. If I’m being honest, your other novel has the same problem,you drag things out for absolutely no reason while making the MC strong but not letting them progress in power.

I enjoyed this novel, but can I ask why you drag the arcs and why you’re so slow to make the MC stronger? I’m at chapter 300, and even though the MC is strong, he is still weak compared to anyone above half-emperors. Also, why do you put so much detail into side characters when they fight, even though they’ll be forgotten later on, like during the tournament arc in the academy? From what I’ve seen, from the chapter where he started going to the academy to where they go to the ruins, only a few months have passed. Let’s be honest, the R18 scenes are boring—it’s just him screwing them in the same way every time. Even after they were all in the same room, he didn’t make a move to follow through on what he said about being with them all together. And he’s still 13 years old for the past 300 chapters. There’s also a lot of unnecessary information. This is the same issue with your other novel. Even though I like this story, I feel like it will take 100,000 chapters before he starts training his magic core. At this pace, the story doesn’t feel worth the time to read anymore. After 300 chapters, not much has changed—the only development is in the people around him, not the MC.

in the early chapters, it was stated that this realm restricts flying, yet here is a bat flying around after 10 chapters or so, completely disregarding the restrictions of the realm they are in or the author forgot i wonder

Thanks, I really want to read and enjoy this story, but it's unrealistic to see a child running around acting as an adult. Even adults would feel creeped out. Just imagine this happening in reality and not in a fantasy world—people would feel creeped out. Even if he is reincarnated, it would still be in his best interest to act like a kid. I will skim through it and wait for the time skip where he is older.

i just want to ask will he ever grow up i past 100 and he is still a 5 year old what chapter should i skip to where he older ?

1.Slow pace needs time-skips. 2.The MC is still a 5-year-old after almost 100 chapters. 3.Too many unnecessary fillers. 4.Excessive focus on background characters. I enjoyed the first 20 to 30 chapters, thinking it was just setting up the story and anticipating a time skip. But oh boy, was I wrong. We're 100 chapters in, and there’s still a ton of unnecessary filler. This novel seems more focused on background characters than the main character. For example, there are 50 to 70 chapters of random mining for mana stones—completely unnecessary. This could have been handled earlier in the story or skipped altogether. Instead, we get a drawn-out sequence that feels like it’s there just to pad the novel. And the whole "killing people with snakes" arc feels like a convoluted way to stretch the story without adding meaningful progression. Even worse, after 100 chapters, the protagonist is still a 5-year-old acting like a full-grown adult. I get that this is a fantasy story, but even fantasy needs some realism. It’s becoming boring. You could skip 10 to 30 chapters and still feel like you haven’t missed anything—that’s how painfully slow the story is. The writing itself is solid, but the pacing and unnecessary padding make this novel feel disappointing. It could really benefit from a rewrite or a significant cut to its length.