Jackleell

First of all, the idea is great, but the execution is bad. There is no character interaction, the whole novel is flawed, and don't get me started on the grammar and the short chapters. I'm sure the author deletes bad reviews—if this gets deleted, I'll have my answer.

Yeah, I was, but I don't want to use something from another novel. I'm doing this for a novel I want to create. I'm writing fanfiction so I can go all out and develop a completely different power system that isn’t part of any novel, movie, anime, etc. I want to make a totally unique power system, but it's been hard to come up with something new over the past few days.

That would still be too much information for him. The Rock is incredibly overpowered, this is a plot hole that I created. You’ll see how that plays out later.

I didn’t use 'Alchemist’s Gaze' in this chapter because I wanted to keep the stone’s significance a secret for later. Revealing too much information would create spoilers and if he used Alchemist’s Gaze on it his head my be blown off haha

I searched it up and found that the price is 1 galleon for 4.93 pounds.

I will use them, but not for killing. No spoilers here, haha! By the way, if you like this novel so far, please drop a review.

This is my first fanfic novel. In the beginning, the story will neither move too quickly nor too slowly. It will focus on world-building. Hope you enjoy.

if you enjoy my novel you should drop a Review

If it were really like that, then Galleons would be worth nothing. If someone could melt them down and make more pounds, then get more Galleons and repeat the process, it wouldn’t work. Even in fanfiction, it wouldn’t be believable. I'll expand on that later.

There will be, but that's still a while away; I'm just at the beginning of my novel.