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Thank you for highlighting that issue. I've been addressing the inconsistencies and am currently working on updating the chapters. I would appreciate it if you could review the revised version once more. Your feedback is invaluable, and I’m grateful for your support!

I’m definitely interested! Let’s discuss the details. What kind of swap are you thinking of, and how would you like to proceed with the review exchange?

Thank you for reading Dungeon Delivery. Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback! I'm glad you found the narrative interesting. I totally understand your point. I’ll definitely consider adding more descriptions of the journey to smooth out those transitions in future chapters. Your support and suggestions mean a lot to me, and I’ll do my best to keep writing and improving! Stay tuned for more chapters!