Hope this catches you up on most things Jon snow(as you can tell I’m a big fan of him)

Ya no problem the directors were Daenerys fans and they wanted women to watch it so made Daenerys more powerful then the books. Her dragons are smaller and won’t grow as fast as the show and there are more hints of her turning to evil in the books. She probably also won’t get as much support as she did in the show. Jon is the heir to the kingdom in the North which is Robb’s title and he legitimized him before his death and named him heir. (This is a major thing in the books as some people from the red wedding are missing in the books and have his will.) the northern kingdom includes the riverlands who swore to Robb stark. Plus a ton of the northerners haven’t been raised yet like the mountain clansman’s etc. when aegon conquered westeros the north marched with over 45,000 men to the neck. Robb only took 20,000 south and factoring in population growth and the vastness of the north(as big as the other kingdoms combined) and Jon being more ambitious and ruthless in the books chances are he won’t kneel to anyone if he is brought back( I think the author said he will be but he is constantly changing the book he said) the vale will also most likely support him nd if he marries someone like Margery he gets another 80,000 men. So if he were to find out his heritage he would probably push for the throne or will still do it anyway to get Joffrey and the Lannisters off of it and put the north in power.

None of the targaryens do. In the books the only reason dany did was from a spell and only during that spell to hatch the eggs. At no other time does she have immunity or resistance to fire.

Read the rest of it who goes on to say he thinks he should have been given something else. Your reading comprehension really sucks as this isn’t the only ti e you have done it and come to defend this author against the majority of people who dropped or pointed out the bad about this book

Also the fact it seems 25 people agree with me on this and you try to defend it who will I believe the twenty who also had the same problem with the novel or one guy with obvious wholes in his logic

Fool read my comment I said he doesn’t portray him as OP the right way and nerfs him. Learn to read fool

And it wasn’t about the canon it’s the things he added to canon that would never happen including the whole don’t salute me talk etc

So have I lol and he is not at all try again others in the book even point it out maybe make an argument with some proof next time? You can even look it up

And I thought you would now that whole read thing is not accurate. A lot of things mess up with it including rereading a chapter or reading it offline by downloading it or using multiple devices like I do. And if your first chapters are bad what do you expect people to do? The whole point of reviews are to point out problems if that happens in the beginning it’s them that you point it out if it gets so bad you drop it in the first few then tell people so they can decide for themselves if they still want to read it. Thats what i do as well ill check the comments to see what people thought of it and depending on how many likes as well as similar comments ill judge if i want to read the book.

Yep sorry but bye his earlier card seems to be no longer working. I hat these major plot holes and don’t care if it turns out he is faking it it’s annoying not knowing what is going on.

No one will read 30 chapters if the first 5-10 aren’t great and what they want as past that point it’s just a waste.

And it would not there are the grounders down there he will still meet them you are trying to make it sound like there is only one way

Sorry got confused with thinking you were another author when I commented that I have been reading lots of HOTD recently forgot I read this.

That is not logic anyone from what you have read would think that he would be his own superpower before the dance of politics and war that will happen. Instead you go against your own story’s premis that he would prepare what he could also do on the arc down on earth all that time in advance look at the comics they all say the same thing not just me. You know an author is terrible when this is his response to criticism when he ruins his own fic and wonders why people are criticizing it when it doesn’t have what they want or expected

That is not the premis that you have set up so you have majorly changed that as in the beginning in the description you don’t mention it at all what you mention is what happens when someone from Valyria of a more powerful dragon lord house than the Targaryens which is nearly any of them appears in the dance. This does bot fulfil that it sounds like you yourself don’t know where your story is going if you manage to constantly change what it’s about id recommend updating your description

You do know fanfic means based on the worlds setting etc right? Like the world itselfs basis has to be the same because it’s what both readers want and it keeps them out of any major legal trouble. You can look it up making major changes has gotten people sued and other stuff. Fan Fic is not what you are trying to make it sound like it is

This is it obviously you can’t recognize it my comments are known to be very much what readers agree with it you look at my history I have countless likes and people agreeing with me so if you act like this when people point out problems with your novel it explains the major drop

Ya sorry dropping. Its been a great story but you are taking to long on the whole military route and just extending chapters to make it seem like more. Plus now you are writing in Italian as well and I’m not going to keep translating just to read a novel. Keep up the good story though and sorry about the Ron of people that are about to drop from my experience of reading novels. From my experience when authors also write in another language without putting it in English next to it in branches or something they tend to drop it I’ve seen an author have excuses like you can look it up or it’s at the bottom etc but no one wants to do that to read a novel. So sorry but this is where it ends for me good luck though.

Yes and all the stuff I said also applies to 5e books what isn’t similar?

Also taking too long on the chapters it’s been a week for 1 chapter when the author claimed to have 5 ready to be released on last Thursday.