Coheed27

Look at you admitting your prejudice. I hate the tropes of “deadly training for children when there are adults to save them.” Makes no sense. Apart from that, I also hate this trope of severe treatment to the “MC” from the family because he won’t hold it against them. I didn’t read much further on but if you do I bet the family will need him and he will end up saving all of them OR he won’t seek true revenge because “it’s his family” even though this is the treatment he receives. Will you also complain when I ask why are you trying to save the family? Why does the MC save people who wouldn’t even value you enough to save you. He will probably be stopped from getting revenge by the leaders and the author will forget about this plot line and so will the MC. Return like for like in these stories, but it’s never done completely. That’s my point! I have read a metric eff ton of these stories and the MCs, more or less, save their family and protect those that didn’t protect nor care about them in the first place. Nah fam not me.

That’s wild! All of the sudden I am very thirsty! Now where to find some milk?

This makes more sense. I was just jarred from the threatening of physical harm to her feeling like it was a great family with warmth lol….

The mom just threatened to break his legs and arms and disown him. “Ahhhhh, yes, the warmth of family.” I was surely lacking this level of warmth from my mother who took my side and never threathened to harm me….she was a failure of a mother and I am a failure of a son.

Thanks! (Not being sarcastic, I just missed the part about mastering) that makes it a little better.

This story fails in every way that is meaningful. Forgotten plot lines, forgotten characters, forgotten FMLs, forgotten promises, and forgotten pasts. I have one suggestion, read until 769 and then stop. Don’t waste your time thinking about any characters that are introduced except the MC. Still waiting to hear what happened to xiaoke(I think that’s her name. The village girl that loved MC.)

Phrasing!!!!

How can he have more tempering when his body was already a “tempered body?” Was he only a tempered body at the 4th stage? That’s kind of confusing

That’s what she said