Luizz_Ricardo

Just be a little realistic

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Hi friend, how are you? When answering you, you need to remember that he ate the fruit of the wood/forest that merged with his chakra and suffered a mutation. Mutations are common in Naruto. The Sharingan is a mutation along with the Rinnegan.

Being honest, the fanfic has no flaws, but what I don't like is its character construction. The protagonist has the limit breaker and chooses the Yamanaka clan, making his path to power difficult for nothing. He just had to choose the Senju or Uchiha clan and have a good amount of time to train, proto superkage level. I also don't like the magician or mental type construction, I find it annoying and crazy.

The story is good, the author has a lot of knowledge about the world of Naruto and respects its rules and standards, many Naruto fanfic authors don't know anything about the functions of chakra, my only criticism is that the dialogues could be better worked and detailed, as well as the space where the MC is located could also be more detailed because this enriches the story.

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When? I'll explain when, it was your protagonist who was saying that in One Piece there are people who equal and surpass Madara and Hashirama, this was when Itachi was fighting the Snake Woman

Honestly, this chapter was one of the best I've ever read, author, your writing skills when it comes to character development and emotions are at their peak.

I was even enjoying it until the author said the biggest nonsense I've ever read, stronger people than Hashirama and Madara in One Piece? Never, maybe equals but never surpasses the two super kage level, not to mention Naruto and Sasuke at the peak, Knew of Six Paths and Kaguya a goddess, the author exaggerated a lot in One Piece