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as someone who love novels I think this book can be one of the best naruto fanfiction so don't abandon this gem

this is the first time I see someone using my country in this app

good novel the personality of our mc is funny the writing is simple and not that bad I only wish for two things first never dropped this novel second can you make him goes to twilight world and makes Alice cullens his love interest

I can tell that this novel have god story but can you upload more frequently and if you have any ideas of abandoning this novel just tell us.

I give it 5 stars cause I know that this novel can be one of the best twilight novels here and I don't want you to abandon it so keep the hard working

first of all I'm happy right now because finally we can see a little fast development for the story I don't want to be rude I just want to help you with some ideas the first is:don't make the childhood arc long. second: can you use the word soulmate bond between the mc and love interest as it will show how much their feelings are and that they are destined like a soul has been splitted in half when they were created or make it an old legend from ancient time how the gods gifted them the soulmate bond and I want to speak in the name of all the readers who don't have money to donate for you in patreon plz don't make us wait a lot to read your chapters we can only read it here .

I don't know why my comments has been deleted so I will tells you again that I have big expectations for your novel your mc is not op,your novels gives a good vibes for us like some mysterious treasure that is waiting for us to open it I wish you upload more chapters frequently ,and to make Alice cullens his love interest cause she's the best girl ever aka the cutest ever😍 aka our childhood crush