PrinceOfThisWorld

The biggest problem with this story is that it doesn't stick to its own premises. The title makes it seem like something different than it is; the cheating is too strong, so strong that it makes the reading uninteresting. I don't have a problem with strong cheating, but this story gives the impression of gradually improving mob characters through mutual collaboration. In reality, this doesn't happen because what's important is the super-powerful AI that allows the protagonist to create any effect he wants. There's no continuity between the worlds, so it's just the author writing all sorts of different fanfics within the "novel." Overall, it's not worth it.

Yes, but even Ince suffers at the hands of 0-08, so he's a co-conspirator hahaha

Author, it might sound strange, but I think I know you in real life. Did you invite people to play volleyball in the college group you're attending? If not, ignore it, it was just too much of a coincidence.

Hahaha, why all the fuss over a cultivation manual? There's vital force, natural energy, and a whole bunch of cultivation world concepts in DxD. This is a world where Buddha and Sun Wukong exist. I don't want to be overly critical, but the authors here complicate the simple and simplify the complicated.

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Author, to be honest, it was a lot of fun to read, but your story has come to an end. You could have dragged it out more, but you seem desperate for your protagonist to grow in power. The multiverse won't help you; there are few worlds that would generate enough tension to keep readers interested, maybe Mondaiji? This story proves your excellence as an author. You could have chosen other plot points; there was Sairaorg, Issei, Vali, and the Chaos Brigade who could act as intermediate antagonists. Rizevim being used as a reason for awakening is reasonable, but it happened too early. The protagonist could have come into contact with the Serpent of Infinity through Diodora and deepened his understanding of concepts without his discovery seeming so abrupt. Of course, all this is just my opinion without ever having written anything myself. I'll leave a 5-star rating because you deserve it.

"It is forbidden to ask for divine powers." "I want to be an immortal dragon immune to magic with the ability to teleport." I think the God of the Bible raised the bar considerably for the notion of divinity. It's not omnipotent and omniscient, but it's certainly very divine.

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