Fan_loverZz

Amazing work, brother! Till now, although the pacing is a bit slow, it looks like it's going to be an awesome story! Please continue to update and don't abandon it mid-may like a lot of the other Fanfics. 🫰🏻🙏🏻🫰🏻

If your're using early anime for reference, that in itself is a huge problem. Ash did a lot of illogical things in the Anime, especially in the early seasons. A Gyrados will never loose to a Charmander, especially in their turf. It can literally drown it or just crush it under it's weight. Pikachu is different due to that Electric-type effectiveness.

Man faces demon spider was the 3rd Spirit Ring. This info is wrong. Check the wiki if you don't believe it.

And no one else knows this, only the Mc? Shades are dangerous and people have wanted to kill them for ages but they never succeed or knew about this, but because it's the mc, it will definitely work. Everything is just so easy for him.

And how does he know how to cast this spell and enchant into the medallion. Who taught it to him? Is reading a book enough to be able to do everything by himself after reincarnation? Where did he get the energy required to cast such a spell on someone so powerful? He can do it just because he wants to?

That argument would work if he was from this world but he's a reincarnator and has read the book, so he should know what to say and what not to. He should also know about mind magic in the books. This is more like you forcing the mistakes in the name of "character development".

Idk. This entire thing just feels bland and rushed. I can't connect with the main character at all and the conversion fell fake and forced. This was just poorly done.

You can just cross it out and write your name again? Ever heard of something called a Pen!?

I'm assuming you meant 6 meters.

What's with the Chapter lengths?? Is this even considered a chapter?