Kalachri

My only thoughts while reading this is whether he will save the bro that is trapped in the cave.

If you think about it the wicked avatar is the perfecct counter for the winged dragon of Ra. Ra takes away your lifepoints until you only have 1 point left, and the wiccked avatar always has 1 point of attack points higher than the strongest moster in the field giving it the exact attack points needed to defeat your opponent. The only real threat is Ra's effect that destroys every other monster

So everyone can hear the sarcastic remarks?? This is getting better by the chapter.

YES! BIDOOF FOR THE WIN!

First of all, I have to say that this is one of the best fics I have ever read. It is clear that the story has a direction, the character semms real which shows when he makes mistakes and develops by making sure he won't repeat them. The characters overall show their different personalities, not just with words but their actions as well that change according to the situation they are in. Overall it's an amazing story with only one disadvantage. The random updates.(Which I can overlook since it is clear that real efford is put into writing each individual chapter.)

Would be fun if he managed to create something similar to the laplace factor.